"An unwelcome look". How many times have I saw that scene?? I empathize with the character because that moment is horrible, you feel lost and bad.. The title is attractive, you couldnt imagen that is going to talk about that situation.
As María said, the firt one could be improved using the first person instead of the third one. The second ine is very funny and sweety. Nice to use the child´s view.
Both are good! :)
ResponderEliminarFrom my point of view, the first one could be better if it was told by the student caught
I really like the 2nd story, it moves me to my primary school time where we exchanged our food.
ResponderEliminarGood ironic twit - fiction
I remember that I help you to adapt the second one in class one morning. I like the result! The play of words is good used to show irony :)
ResponderEliminar"An unwelcome look". How many times have I saw that scene?? I empathize with the character because that moment is horrible, you feel lost and bad..
ResponderEliminarThe title is attractive, you couldnt imagen that is going to talk about that situation.
As María said, the firt one could be improved using the first person instead of the third one. The second ine is very funny and sweety. Nice to use the child´s view.
ResponderEliminarThe first tweet is fantastic!
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