Last
week I was surprised. Yesterday I was relaxed. Today I am perfect. This morning
when I was still half asleep, suddenly the radio switched on. It was news: "a man spend five years applying for
his dream job as a journalist with a national newspaper. Every time his
application was rejected. Last week he was finally given the job and yesterday he
wrote an article in the newspaper saying that he had decided not to accept it”.
Unexpectedly He rolled out of bed unwillingly and showered. He couldn´t stop
smiling during the morning and so on.
the news piece is great - now turn it into a story, not a commentary!
ResponderEliminarI have just re-writen my story. I will change for the new one. I hope you like more than the last one.
ResponderEliminarby: Isabel
good job, Isabel. From now on, please comment using your own name (not "four") so I know who it is - especially when commenting on other people's blogs.
ResponderEliminarI like the use of the time "Last week, yesterday, today" that helps to understand the story in a better way.
ResponderEliminarIt has a good beginning and play with the irony, I like it!
ResponderEliminaryou expect the work of your life and then reject it, very good title. SHOCKING
ResponderEliminarAngela