She, scared, tryed to run, but fell down. Affortunately, appeared the hand that saved the apple.
The knife only undressed her.
The book decided to commit suicide, it was alone.
It broke all his own papers, including the title page...
miércoles, 7 de diciembre de 2011
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Live or died?: unespected ending!funny, good job!
ResponderEliminarLovely stories!
ResponderEliminarand very metaphoric!
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ResponderEliminarOriginal stories! I like it!
ResponderEliminar"Live or died?" is the best, moving in the begining with shocking ending! It is funny and makes us smile!
Bea Ara
Live or die is great!! You can´t imagine that it is an apple until the end... it has a good imagery too,good work!!
ResponderEliminar"Live or dead?" is a really original twitter-fiction! Good metaphor and good use of vocabulary!
ResponderEliminarCongratulation!! Good metaphores and also good vocabulary!
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