Ana Algaba, Elisabeth Gifford, Isabel Sánchez y Eva Herrón.
It is good, but I had put another surprising end!Angela
Yeah! that´s true!! I didn´t think about this before!!you´re right! hahaThis short has a very clear story, I like it =)
Clear, short and true! What else?? Good work!
Change the title; it will help the story, making it more socking.Short but tigh and compact.I like it
It sounds more like an add than like a story. For me, it doesn´t have any strength that makes me re-read it or even catching it. Sorry!
It is good, but I had put another surprising end!
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Yeah! that´s true!! I didn´t think about this before!!you´re right! haha
ResponderEliminarThis short has a very clear story, I like it =)
Clear, short and true! What else?? Good work!
ResponderEliminarChange the title; it will help the story, making it more socking.
ResponderEliminarShort but tigh and compact.
I like it
It sounds more like an add than like a story. For me, it doesn´t have any strength that makes me re-read it or even catching it. Sorry!
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