Alison, a
beautiful and very rich girl went to “St Thomas school”. This school was
located in a poor neighborhood of London.
She was one
of the most beautiful and stylish girl so many people followed her, some of
them for her things and another for popularity. She always wanted to choose the
activities and the places to go out and the film that went to see. People
around her began to tired and telephone her less and less. Alison was
capricious girl so if you did things that she didn´t want, she would make your
life hell.
The end of
the course was famous for the Spring Festival. Alison was presented to Miss Spring
Festival, she was sure she will win. Suddenly all the people began to laugh of
her.
-Damn fart, you ruined my life.
The ending isn´t expected. This story could be shorter. Be careful with some grammar mistakes!
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